His "Hazel" eyes,,
they dance,,
they smile,,
they penetrate my soul..
I look at him,,
then I am lost!
He stares at me,,
and again I feel complete,,
I feel whole!
Oh, how I long to caress his cheek,,
to feel that soft stubble tingle my palm,,
hear my heart just this once
and answer its tempting call!
Who are you beautiful stranger in my dream?
An angel??
Or a sweet curse haunting my sleep??
Have I seen you??
Have I known you before??
His "Hazel" eyes..
they dance,,
they smile,,
they capture my very soul!!
5 comments:
beautiful honey,
"Or a sweet curse haunting my sleep??" my favorite :)
"Oh, how I long to caress his cheek,,
to feel that soft stubble tingle my palm,,
hear my heart just this once
and answer its tempting call!",, unbelievably vivid ;)
Thank you hayati,,
and yeah haven't I told you that this description about the stubble would spark interest;))
Well, that is thw whole point, to stir some enthusiasm and imagination, and it is all about imagination and how we could make use of that imaginationh to draw vivid pictures, such as this one.
Thanks love, I love your comments no matter how short they are, it is you who matters sweetie:)
;D
Thank yoooooooou 7abeeby :D
Hey babes...
I'm sorry for not being around.
ahem... I'm HERE now :)
ahem...
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!
sorry for shouting out but really sweets it's amazing. Beautifully written masha'Allah.
I love the whole contradictions in your feelings. They make the whole piece SO unbelievably TRUE to the heart!
Wondering though, why “Hazel”?? ;)
Love you
-hugs-
Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeey Hadeel,
Well, now I can SHOUT back that the blog has been blessed with more & more light, missed your presence here lady!:)))
Welcome back;)
Well, I am as always glad that my poem has reserved its place in your heart;D
Why hazel??
Ahem, join the club of the ones wondering why hazel?;))) lol
Truth is I just love this colour tremendously, very warm, and looks passionate;)
I had a dream about a 'No face' with Hazel eyes and I couldn't stop myself from falling in love with my No Face all over again. Heeeeeey here it goes;))
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